liquid
my thoughts elude me
as i try to grasp them;
like water, they slide through my hands,
and i feel helpless as they soak the ground.
you ask me for an answer,
so i wrestle with the earth
to try and give you a glimpse of my intentions;
but it turns to mud, and I mess the house
(it dries, and so do i,
cracked, unable to stand, and i crumble in your hands)
when will the rain soothe the parchness?
will the time ever come,
when liquid turns to solid,
when my soul sings again?
6 Comments:
At 7:25 PM, Keller said…
Man, poetry seems to be becoming a common theme on people's blogs now... but it is refreshing... just like "liquid"... great poem.
At 10:55 AM, Superjan said…
i find poetry can often express more than prose ever could
At 1:49 AM, Megan said…
That was really nice Janet. Also, I have a blanket with the water drop that looks exactly like that picture.. (it was the first thing I thought of)
At 9:16 PM, Anonymous said…
Good to see you aren't staying up so late - that the creative juices flow in the afternoon too! Was glad I could see you for a couple of hours on Friday. Not long enough tho. Love you.
At 9:33 PM, Anonymous said…
sounds like you need a dose of Auntie B! Just realized you have at least three of these,but you should know who I mean.
At 9:34 PM, Joy said…
are you still alive?
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