musings of a city girl

a look into the mind and heart of Janet as she struggles to shine amidst the clamor and concrete in an impersonal city.

Thursday, October 27, 2005

liquid



my thoughts elude me
as i try to grasp them;
like water, they slide through my hands,
and i feel helpless as they soak the ground.

you ask me for an answer,
so i wrestle with the earth
to try and give you a glimpse of my intentions;
but it turns to mud, and I mess the house

(it dries, and so do i,
cracked, unable to stand, and i crumble in your hands)

when will the rain soothe the parchness?
will the time ever come,
when liquid turns to solid,
when my soul sings again?

6 Comments:

  • At 7:25 PM, Blogger Keller said…

    Man, poetry seems to be becoming a common theme on people's blogs now... but it is refreshing... just like "liquid"... great poem.

     
  • At 10:55 AM, Blogger Superjan said…

    i find poetry can often express more than prose ever could

     
  • At 1:49 AM, Blogger Megan said…

    That was really nice Janet. Also, I have a blanket with the water drop that looks exactly like that picture.. (it was the first thing I thought of)

     
  • At 9:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Good to see you aren't staying up so late - that the creative juices flow in the afternoon too! Was glad I could see you for a couple of hours on Friday. Not long enough tho. Love you.

     
  • At 9:33 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    sounds like you need a dose of Auntie B! Just realized you have at least three of these,but you should know who I mean.

     
  • At 9:34 PM, Blogger Joy said…

    are you still alive?

     

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